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Сообщение от SergeKhalin - English

  • A Day, When I've Understood A Lot

  • Hello!
  • My name is Sergey.
  • I'm 21 years old.
  • And I haven't made anything useful. I thought so.
  • I often say that I have depression.
  • But I've just understood that it isn't true.
  • Now I see that keeping a diary is very useful thing.
  • But I don't like to do it.
  • Usually I write little notes about my life.
  • Yesterday I found the one of such notes. I read it.
  • And I got a different look at all things in my life.
  • I understood that now I'm happy.
  • I am much more happy than ever before.
  • Of course, I feel some upset sometimes, but it's just because I can't find a way to reach all what I want.
  • In my past I didn't want anything.
  • I lived like lots of people lived.
  • I swam the stream.
  • I didn't know who am I and what I would like to be. Now I know it.
  • And now there are lots of things which I want to do.
  • And I hope, I'll find a way to reach it.
  • All what people can see is Serj, who sleeps a lot, who always uses antibacterial gel, who likes to walk alone through the night streets, who smokes a lot.
  • And of course, they know Serj, who tries to give them smiles, who tries to look always happy and сarefree.
  • But nobody knows what I feel inside of myself.
  • Before you will point a finger at me, make sure that your hands are clean.
  • And if a man don't say you about his hobbies, works, private life, you should think, may be he don't make it because he just don't want to look arrogant.
  • I don't know how to finish this article. May be... I'm Sergey.
  • I'm 21 years old.
  • I like reading, writing, learning foreign languages.
  • I study at the university.
  • I try to become a vegan.
  • I want to help people.
  • And I want just to look good :)

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English