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Text from Lisa_Summmers - English

  • Being addicted to chocolate is the same as being addicted to dr

  • What can be more delicious than chocolate?
  • Almost everyone loves chocolate: children, women, senior persons… Chocolate is the most popular sweet thing.
  • In fact every woman knows that too much chocolate can lead to some extra weight.
  • But does anyone know that too much chocolate lead to addiction?
  • Does anyone suppose that this addiction is as harmful as an addiction to drugs?
  • Nevertheless people pay attention only to its advantages.
  • They say that chocolate helps to maintain our mental work or that it helps us to feel full of energy due to lots of calories containing in chocolate.
  • Meanwhile chocolate is a silent drug that eats us up from inside.
  • It is proved that thousands of people eat chocolate everyday but don’t suppose that it contains caffeine.
  • As it contains lots of caffeine it is as harmful as coffee or other drinks containing caffeine like cola, for instance.
  • With the help of caffeine we can feel refreshed in the mornings after eating chocolate or we can sit up late hours in the evenings.
  • At first we feel that chocolate really makes us being full of energy.
  • However as time goes by our health becomes poorer and poorer.
  • It should be mentioned, that many people even don’t connect their poor health with eating chocolate.
  • Actually step by step our health gets poisoned by caffeine.
  • The simplest way to prove that chocolate is a real addiction is to try to give up eating it or just cut down the amounts.
  • It won’t be an easy thing to do, because we really got hooked on it.
  • During the first weeks without chocolate it will be hard to live without that fantastic and so familiar taste of chocolate.
  • And every time you will go shopping those colorful bars of chocolate will be tempting you again and again.
  • Moreover as you get used to the fact that chocolate gives you lots of energy you may feel extremely tired without it.
  • But all these sufferings are worthy, as living without chocolate is much better: it gives you better sleep and much more energy than any chocolate!
  • On the other hand, nowadays we have an incredibly busy lifestyle and it is hard to imagine our life without such a useful thing as caffeine!
  • It is not a secret that many of us are hooked on caffeine, particularly on chocolate.
  • Many of us just don’t have enough time for a proper sleep.
  • And a bar of chocolate is the only thing that helps them to work the whole day without feeling tired or sleepy.
  • All in all, everyone decides for himself, whether he wants to have good health or deceive himself that chocolate is the source of energy.
  • Anyway people should know that chocolate is the same as drugs and that they can easily get addicted to it.
  • Then, I believe, it will be easier for them to make a right choice.

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