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Make friend
Hi, My name is Long and I am from Vietnam.
I want to improve my english skill.
Can anyone give me a hand?
And I really want to make friend with all of you.
Current I am staying in HCM city.
If anyone who is travelling to HCM needs my help or want to make friend with me, please contact me. :)

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- Make friend
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- Hi, My name is Long and I am from Vietnam.
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- I want to improve my english skill.
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- Can anyone give me a hand?
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- And I really want to make friend with all of you.
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- Current I am staying in HCM city.
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- If anyone who is travelling to HCM needs my help or want to make friend with me, please contact me. :)
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