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Make friend
Hi, My name is Long and I am from Vietnam.
I want to improve my english skill.
Can anyone give me a hand?
And I really want to make friend with all of you.
Current I am staying in HCM city.
If anyone who is travelling to HCM needs my help or want to make friend with me, please contact me. :)

longvuFebruary 2015赶紧投票吧！
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- Make friend
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi, My name is Long and I am from Vietnam.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I want to improve my english skill.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Can anyone give me a hand?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- And I really want to make friend with all of you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Current I am staying in HCM city.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- If anyone who is travelling to HCM needs my help or want to make friend with me, please contact me. :)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6