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  • My Motivation Letter for Aisling Project

  • Working with children requires a special approach, because children are moody, stubborn, they need to explain everything in detail and interest them.
  • After spending a lot of time in the sport, I still play and talk with children every day.
  • Sometimes I, as a trainer, look after the children, because sport in some moments can be very dangerous and it is important to understand that, but sport gives a lot of good skills, agility, strength, reaction, they can save lives in emergency situations, I had this a situation in my life, and I am very glad that I trained.
  • I participated in the sport camp where we trained a couple of weeks, and were sporting events.
  • Now I'm one of the older athletes with experience in 17 years, having prizes for running, swimming, conoeing and rowing.
  • Watching a child, I can tell him what qualities it is better to develop.
  • I can teach a child to play in the team, even without the use of words, knowing only the movement of players, this skill is very useful.
  • For example one man comes to us play basketball, he speaks English badly, he is volunteer from Spain, but we understand each other with gestures very good.
  • I have experience of sporting events and their organizations, know how to make them interesting and safe.
  • As a volunteer, I would like to meet new people and make new friends, improve spoken skill and get life experience.
  • I don't have bad habits.
  • _______________________________________________ P.s.
  • I glad to see your tips and additions.

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    • Working with children requires a special approach, because children are moody, stubborn, they need to explain everything in detail and interest them.
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    • Sometimes I, as a trainer, look after the children, because sport in some moments can be very dangerous and it is important to understand that, but sport gives a lot of good skills, agility, strength, reaction, they can save lives in emergency situations, I had this a situation in my life, and I am very glad that I trained.
      투표하세요!
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    • Now I'm one of the older athletes with experience in 17 years, having prizes for running, swimming, conoeing and rowing.
      투표하세요!
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    • I can teach a child to play in the team, even without the use of words, knowing only the movement of players, this skill is very useful.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • For example one man comes to us play basketball, he speaks English badly, he is volunteer from Spain, but we understand each other with gestures very good.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
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