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My pet
My pet dead yesterday, I loved it so muchos, its name was Manchas, I had found it in a park when it was 1 month years old.
I always will remember it.
I'd like to hace another pet seemed it.

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- My pet
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- My pet dead yesterday, I loved it so muchos, its name was Manchas, I had found it in a park when it was 1 month years old.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I always will remember it.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- I'd like to hace another pet seemed it.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3