添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Yeison123からのテキスト - English

  • My pet

  • My pet dead yesterday, I loved it so muchos, its name was Manchas, I had found it in a park when it was 1 month years old.
  • I always will remember it.
  • I'd like to hace another pet seemed it.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English