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Text from Marionbrl - English

  • Hello every one, I'm new at it!

  • Hi everybody, my name's Mary (I take an english name but that's not my real one even if it's quite close to mine) let me introduce myself first, I am 17 yo and I'm student in the high school of my town.
  • I practice english at school for like 8 years approximately and I like so.
  • I've always had high marks in this subject, (I practice also german but that's not as interresting to be honnest..). Anyway!
  • I went in Calfornia last summer (in Los Angeles and San Francisco) it was a wonderful,amazing, incredible travel!
  • I know people in Sacramento (near San Francisco for those who don't know) so I could practice with them too, I just loved to commuticate with them in this beautiful language!
  • I want to becom a lawyer after the high school and do a double law degree with french and english laws.
  • Travel with my job would be a dream and I intend to achieve it.
  • So now I wath US series and movies, and now I'm hear making this text correct by you!
  • Thank you for reading me, and correct !

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English