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Hi everybody, my name's Mary (I take an english name but that's not my real one even if it's quite close to mine) let me introduce myself first, I am 17 yo and I'm student in the high school of my town.

I practice english at school for like 8 years approximately and I like so.

I've always had high marks in this subject, (I practice also german but that's not as interresting to be honnest..). Anyway!

I went in Calfornia last summer (in Los Angeles and San Francisco) it was a wonderful,amazing, incredible travel!

I know people in Sacramento (near San Francisco for those who don't know) so I could practice with them too, I just loved to commuticate with them in this beautiful language!

I want to becom a lawyer after the high school and do a double law degree with french and english laws.

Travel with my job would be a dream and I intend to achieve it.

So now I wath US series and movies, and now I'm hear making this text correct by you!

Thank you for reading me, and correct !