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  • Is there any good soul that will help me ? :)

  • Dear Ladies and Gentlemen, I am a student of business computing at the University of Passau in the 6th semester and will soon acquire my Bachelor of Science in this field.
  • However, I think it is time to get some practical experience before I finish my bachelor, because academic studies are always rather theoretical and I would like to have experience in my field of study, before I finish my Bachelor.
  • Therefore I joined the AIESEC Global Talent program to find an internship in Poland for at least 6 months, which will provide me with a versatile and challenging experience in my fields of studies for my personal development.
  • I see this internship as a great opportunity for my job- related goals and I would love to bring all my strenghtes to your company.
  • I am a very ambitous, reliable as well as highly motivated person.
  • Morever handling stress and even faceing multiple tasks at once I do not lose my nerves and handle them successfully.
  • Another factor which is very important for me is, that in such an internship I can take responsibility in a versitale work atmosphere.
  • Another fascination that I’m keen on is psychology and therefore I started to study this subject parellely at the distance University of Hagen, where I am currently studying in the second semester.
  • I do enjoy a lot to work in teams and therefore psychology is a very important skill in my opinion.
  • As i mentioned before.
  • I would love to go to Poland for my internship.
  • I have been fascinated with Poland, its culture and its people since I attended high school, where I started to teach Polish by myself.
  • I have been visiting this country very often since then and I am very familiar with its customs and tradition.
  • Whenever I visit Poland I feel like being at home.
  • Having the opportunity to gain great practical experience plus living in this country are my greatest dream I’ve been following for many years now.
  • Of course, I also speak basic Polish and at the moment I’m taking a course that will provide me qirh A2 level in polish.
  • All my strenghtes I would love to bring to your company and complete your first impressions from my application with a personal conversation.
  • Yours sincerely,

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Dear Ladies and Gentlemen, I am a student of business computing at the University of Passau in the 6th semester and will soon acquire my Bachelor of Science in this field.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • However, I think it is time to get some practical experience before I finish my bachelor, because academic studies are always rather theoretical and I would like to have experience in my field of study, before I finish my Bachelor.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 2
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    • Therefore I joined the AIESEC Global Talent program to find an internship in Poland for at least 6 months, which will provide me with a versatile and challenging experience in my fields of studies for my personal development.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • I see this internship as a great opportunity for my job- related goals and I would love to bring all my strenghtes to your company.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4
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    • Morever handling stress and even faceing multiple tasks at once I do not lose my nerves and handle them successfully.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
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    • Another factor which is very important for me is, that in such an internship I can take responsibility in a versitale work atmosphere.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • Another fascination that I’m keen on is psychology and therefore I started to study this subject parellely at the distance University of Hagen, where I am currently studying in the second semester.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
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    • I have been fascinated with Poland, its culture and its people since I attended high school, where I started to teach Polish by myself.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12
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    • Having the opportunity to gain great practical experience plus living in this country are my greatest dream I’ve been following for many years now.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15
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    • Of course, I also speak basic Polish and at the moment I’m taking a course that will provide me qirh A2 level in polish.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16
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    • All my strenghtes I would love to bring to your company and complete your first impressions from my application with a personal conversation.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 17PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 17
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