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Dear Ladies and Gentlemen, I am a student of business computing at the University of Passau in the 6th semester and will soon acquire my Bachelor of Science in this field.

However, I think it is time to get some practical experience before I finish my bachelor, because academic studies are always rather theoretical and I would like to have experience in my field of study, before I finish my Bachelor.

Therefore I joined the AIESEC Global Talent program to find an internship in Poland for at least 6 months, which will provide me with a versatile and challenging experience in my fields of studies for my personal development.

I see this internship as a great opportunity for my job- related goals and I would love to bring all my strenghtes to your company.

I am a very ambitous, reliable as well as highly motivated person.

Morever handling stress and even faceing multiple tasks at once I do not lose my nerves and handle them successfully.

Another factor which is very important for me is, that in such an internship I can take responsibility in a versitale work atmosphere.

Another fascination that I’m keen on is psychology and therefore I started to study this subject parellely at the distance University of Hagen, where I am currently studying in the second semester.

I do enjoy a lot to work in teams and therefore psychology is a very important skill in my opinion.

As i mentioned before.

I would love to go to Poland for my internship.

I have been fascinated with Poland, its culture and its people since I attended high school, where I started to teach Polish by myself.

I have been visiting this country very often since then and I am very familiar with its customs and tradition.

Whenever I visit Poland I feel like being at home.

Having the opportunity to gain great practical experience plus living in this country are my greatest dream I’ve been following for many years now.

Of course, I also speak basic Polish and at the moment I’m taking a course that will provide me qirh A2 level in polish.

All my strenghtes I would love to bring to your company and complete your first impressions from my application with a personal conversation.

Yours sincerely,