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My Day
Yesterday I went to zoo.
We walked a lot of time between pens.
We have a lot of pictures of animals.
While we snack bird escaped from its pen and fun escaping from visitors.
It was a very good day.

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- Yesterday I went to zoo.
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- We walked a lot of time between pens.
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- We have a lot of pictures of animals.
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- While we snack bird escaped from its pen and fun escaping from visitors.
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- It was a very good day.
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