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從goldenpatrik來的文本 - English

  • My Day

  • Yesterday I went to zoo.
  • We walked a lot of time between pens.
  • We have a lot of pictures of animals.
  • While we snack bird escaped from its pen and fun escaping from visitors.
  • It was a very good day.

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