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  • My old neckbeard friend Q

  • When I was 12, I didn't have much friends and only had this one guy (let's call him Master Strategy since he LOVED playing starcraft,red alert...or games in the same genre).
  • Needless to say, he's also the only one I could invite to my house to have fun with.
  • But instead of having fun like normal friends supposed to do, he just took my computer, insisted me watching him playing this "very cool game" he'd just bought then spent 3-4 hours using MY COMPUTER to play those game as if he's lost in it.
  • During that time, I just went away and did my homeworks, reading some comic books and even finished lunch!
  • (He said he didn't want to eat because he's "too focus").
  • TL;DR: Neckbeard childhood friend went to my house,used my PC to play game all by himself then just went home.
  • And he called that "having fun with friends"

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    • When I was 12, I didn't have much friends and only had this one guy (let's call him Master Strategy since he LOVED playing starcraft,red alert...or games in the same genre).
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    • But instead of having fun like normal friends supposed to do, he just took my computer, insisted me watching him playing this "very cool game" he'd just bought then spent 3-4 hours using MY COMPUTER to play those game as if he's lost in it.
      투표하세요!
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