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hl0n szövege - English

  • Hello

  • when I write same essay to my teacher I get grade D but I thing I will get A next time but I need to fix my problems .
  • my grimmer is very poor and my spieling is worse so give me any advice to help my to do better in my writing .

KÉRLEK, SEGÍTS KIJAVÍTANI MINDEN MONDATOT! - English