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Hello
when I write same essay to my teacher I get grade D but I thing I will get A next time but I need to fix my problems .
my grimmer is very poor and my spieling is worse so give me any advice to help my to do better in my writing .

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- Hello
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- when I write same essay to my teacher I get grade D but I thing I will get A next time but I need to fix my problems .
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- my grimmer is very poor and my spieling is worse so give me any advice to help my to do better in my writing .
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2