수정본

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!수정되지 않은

SongMyungWoo (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

Mers: South Korea closes 700 schools after third death
Is South Korea such a famous country that the news about it is written on the BBC?
Or is the response ,closing lots of schools, so unusual among other countries?
Anyway, as a Korean student, I think closing schools for some disasters such as heavy snow, pervading of illness and so forth is not a special thing.
So I wonder why the news is there.
But the fact Korean carrier did golf and went to China, which I didn't know made me shame.
I know I should respect the civil servants as the job is demanding.
But I also think the ones who are not capable of doing the task should resign from the work, they don't deserve receiving that much pay.

제목
- Mers: South Korea closes 700 schools after third death
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Is South Korea such a famous country that the news about it is written on the BBC?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Or is the response ,closing lots of schools, so unusual among other countries?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Anyway, as a Korean student, I think closing schools for some disasters such as heavy snow, pervading of illness and so forth is not a special thing.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- So I wonder why the news is there.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- But the fact Korean carrier did golf and went to China, which I didn't know made me shame.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I know I should respect the civil servants as the job is demanding.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- But I also think the ones who are not capable of doing the task should resign from the work, they don't deserve receiving that much pay.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7