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Mers: South Korea closes 700 schools after third death
Is South Korea such a famous country that the news about it is written on the BBC?
Or is the response ,closing lots of schools, so unusual among other countries?
Anyway, as a Korean student, I think closing schools for some disasters such as heavy snow, pervading of illness and so forth is not a special thing.
So I wonder why the news is there.
But the fact Korean carrier did golf and went to China, which I didn't know made me shame.
I know I should respect the civil servants as the job is demanding.
But I also think the ones who are not capable of doing the task should resign from the work, they don't deserve receiving that much pay.

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- Mers: South Korea closes 700 schools after third death
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- Is South Korea such a famous country that the news about it is written on the BBC?
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- Or is the response ,closing lots of schools, so unusual among other countries?
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- Anyway, as a Korean student, I think closing schools for some disasters such as heavy snow, pervading of illness and so forth is not a special thing.
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- So I wonder why the news is there.
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- But the fact Korean carrier did golf and went to China, which I didn't know made me shame.
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- I know I should respect the civil servants as the job is demanding.
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- But I also think the ones who are not capable of doing the task should resign from the work, they don't deserve receiving that much pay.
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