添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Tiziana1977からのテキスト - English

  • Domestic war.

  • The funniest think of the advertising is that the actors are impecable.
  • Their hairs, clothes and make up.
  • When I clean my house, seems that I did a war without elmet. It's funny.
  • When you are tired and not elegant, it arrive the postman.
  • He is a hero, because every day he sees natural women that are outputs to "domestic war".He is a gentleman because don't notes the appaerance in that moment.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English