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Domestic war.
The funniest think of the advertising is that the actors are impecable.
Their hairs, clothes and make up.
When I clean my house, seems that I did a war without elmet. It's funny.
When you are tired and not elegant, it arrive the postman.
He is a hero, because every day he sees natural women that are outputs to "domestic war".He is a gentleman because don't notes the appaerance in that moment.

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- Domestic war.
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câu 1
- The funniest think of the advertising is that the actors are impecable.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- Their hairs, clothes and make up.
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câu 3
- When I clean my house, seems that I did a war without elmet. It's funny.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- When you are tired and not elegant, it arrive the postman.
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câu 5
- He is a hero, because every day he sees natural women that are outputs to "domestic war".He is a gentleman because don't notes the appaerance in that moment.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5