添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Dinhdanからのテキスト - English

  • Thinking about happy life

  • As you may know, every person has different standards of a happy life In my oppinion happy life mean having freedom by that i mean i would like travel independently travlling solo affords you more freedom to do what you want I also make new friends on my trip I have my own decide

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English