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從Dinhdan來的文本 - English

  • Thinking about happy life

  • As you may know, every person has different standards of a happy life In my oppinion happy life mean having freedom by that i mean i would like travel independently travlling solo affords you more freedom to do what you want I also make new friends on my trip I have my own decide

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    • As you may know, every person has different standards of a happy life In my oppinion happy life mean having freedom by that i mean i would like travel independently travlling solo affords you more freedom to do what you want I also make new friends on my trip I have my own decide
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