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從Aliulameer來的文本 - English

  • part of recommendation letter

  • Additional information that could be of importance to the scholarship award decision.
  • this will be for 3 assessors: The mechanical department offered an assistance lecture position to Ali after he finished his masters degree because he finished his masters degree in the first class, but he rejected because he has dreams to go aboard and do his Ph.D. degree and I appreciate his decision and his ambition and I hope you give him the chance to get his Ph.D. degree.
  • Ali got the second class in mechanical engineering at theDepartment-university of Kufa, and he got excellent marks in his bachelor project.
  • He's also very ambitious for a young person and I hope you will give him the chance to fulfil his dream by awarding him a scholarship.
  • Ali came to Germany to achieve his Ph.D. in such an advanced country and such advanced institute, but he can’t do his Ph.D. without your support.

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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    • this will be for 3 assessors: The mechanical department offered an assistance lecture position to Ali after he finished his masters degree because he finished his masters degree in the first class, but he rejected because he has dreams to go aboard and do his Ph.D. degree and I appreciate his decision and his ambition and I hope you give him the chance to get his Ph.D. degree.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
  • 句子 3
    • Ali got the second class in mechanical engineering at theDepartment-university of Kufa, and he got excellent marks in his bachelor project.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
  • 句子 4
    • He's also very ambitious for a young person and I hope you will give him the chance to fulfil his dream by awarding him a scholarship.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
  • 句子 5
    • Ali came to Germany to achieve his Ph.D. in such an advanced country and such advanced institute, but he can’t do his Ph.D. without your support.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5