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  • Charitable Giving

  • According to the reading passage, we can explain two reasons for charitable giving: altruism and personal interest.
  • The first reason can be explained by the natural feeling that someone needs to help another, donating money, clothes, spreading love or anything else.
  • The second one shows that people can help each other just for their selves’ personal interest.
  • For example, wealthy people building public libraries or hospitals just for positive publicity in order to raise their selves public image.
  • Then we were impact by the listening passage, which tells about Gladys Holm’s charity history.
  • This woman is a great illustration for the altruist way of life, she has saved a lot of money during her entire life, and then when she died she left this amount for Children’s Memorial Hospital.
  • We can understand she has done that in order to send back entire good thing that Hospital has done for her friend’s daughter.
  • Therefore, we can realize she was matter about only in spread peace and love on human being history.
  • Summarizing, people who does not care about money and material stuff, as Gladys Home was, cannot see any problem in donating a great amount of money.
  • All of they do is help each other no matter what they have to do.

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