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  • Dear Mr, My name is Johann Castaneda.
  • I’m contacting you because I have a strong interest in the work that you do at the COMET initiative and I would like to get involved in it.
  • Currently, I’m a human medicines evaluator at the French National Authority for Health (HAS) and I would like to move out to the UK soon.
  • I’m a young Colombian pharmacist and I have a French Master degree in public health focused in epidemiology.
  • Throughout my professional experience, I’ve gained depth knowledge in clinical epidemiology, particularly in clinical trials methodology applied to medicines evaluation.
  • I also have some experience in systematic reviews and the elaboration of European practice guidelines.
  • Consequently, I’ve become to realize how important the utilization of meaningful outcomes in medical research is for public health, as it defines the actual utility for society of the gained knowledge.
  • For those reasons, I would like to send you my CV and let you know that I’m available for any professional opportunity or funded PhD position available in your unit.
  • If for any reason there is not available position that you could offer me, I would be grateful if you let me know about any other offer in the UK in the field of clinical epidemiology.
  • Sincerely yours,

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    • I’m contacting you because I have a strong interest in the work that you do at the COMET initiative and I would like to get involved in it.
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    • Currently, I’m a human medicines evaluator at the French National Authority for Health (HAS) and I would like to move out to the UK soon.
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    • Throughout my professional experience, I’ve gained depth knowledge in clinical epidemiology, particularly in clinical trials methodology applied to medicines evaluation.
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    • Consequently, I’ve become to realize how important the utilization of meaningful outcomes in medical research is for public health, as it defines the actual utility for society of the gained knowledge.
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    • For those reasons, I would like to send you my CV and let you know that I’m available for any professional opportunity or funded PhD position available in your unit.
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    • If for any reason there is not available position that you could offer me, I would be grateful if you let me know about any other offer in the UK in the field of clinical epidemiology.
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