Korektoj

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Text from Cleonyan - English

  • school talk about "Homelands and Belonging"

  • In fact, the Erasmus program enables to European students to study in another European country for 3 years minimum or one year maximum.
  • This program had existed since 1987, 33 countries are members and more than 4000 Higher institutions are participating.
  • According to a study, in 2012-2013, 270 000 students used this program.
  • Spain was the country which sent the most students abroad, and also the most popular destination, followed by Germany and France.
  • The average duration of student exchanges was six months, and 40% of the students were studying social sciences, business and law.
  • Personally, I would be ready to go abroad for one year, I would love to go to Japan.
  • But Erasmus is an exchange program between European countries so if I should go to Japan, it would be through another association.
  • Lille 3 has several partner universities with Japan, and suggests going abroad for one year during the 3rd year of the degree or during the master, and I would like to take advantage of these exchanges to be able to go there.
  • I will do everything I can to do it because the places are limited.
  • Indeed, going abroad during the studies is a very enriching experience since it allows us to discover a new culture completely different from our culture.
  • This will also greatly increase our level of language because we have the opportunity to practice it everyday in real life situations.
  • Going to a foreign country is also an opportunity to make friends, to visit the country, and to have a new point of view about the outside world.
  • Secondly, I’m going to talk about the question 7 which is “Would you be prepared to emigrate and start a career in a different country?”.
  • Actually, I am already prepared to emigrate since I decided to live and make a career in Japan after my studies.
  • I’m studying Japanese with this aim in mind.
  • I’ve been passionate about this country for years, I love its culture and its lifestyle.
  • Moreover, living in another country has many advantages such as becoming more open minded.
  • According to a survey, about 16% of the world's adults would like to move to another country permanently if they had the chance.
  • It represents 700 millions of persons.
  • People who would like to live in another country the most are from sub-Saharan Africa, and people who would prefer to stay in their country the most are from Asia.
  • Moreover, the United States are the most desired destination country, followed by Canada and the United Kingdom.
  • However, living abroad has also drawbacks, especially the fact of living away from our family.
  • At first, it may be difficult because if we have a problem, our family can’t easily move to see us.
  • The language barrier can also be a problem.
  • Being understood and understanding the other persons is a challenge that we must overcome.
  • That's why I’m studying Japanese before going to Japan.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • In fact, the Erasmus program enables to European students to study in another European country for 3 years minimum or one year maximum.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • This program had existed since 1987, 33 countries are members and more than 4000 Higher institutions are participating.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • Spain was the country which sent the most students abroad, and also the most popular destination, followed by Germany and France.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • The average duration of student exchanges was six months, and 40% of the students were studying social sciences, business and law.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • But Erasmus is an exchange program between European countries so if I should go to Japan, it would be through another association.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Lille 3 has several partner universities with Japan, and suggests going abroad for one year during the 3rd year of the degree or during the master, and I would like to take advantage of these exchanges to be able to go there.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • Indeed, going abroad during the studies is a very enriching experience since it allows us to discover a new culture completely different from our culture.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • This will also greatly increase our level of language because we have the opportunity to practice it everyday in real life situations.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • Going to a foreign country is also an opportunity to make friends, to visit the country, and to have a new point of view about the outside world.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • Secondly, I’m going to talk about the question 7 which is “Would you be prepared to emigrate and start a career in a different country?”.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
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  • Frazo 18
    • According to a survey, about 16% of the world's adults would like to move to another country permanently if they had the chance.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
  • Frazo 19
  • Frazo 20
    • People who would like to live in another country the most are from sub-Saharan Africa, and people who would prefer to stay in their country the most are from Asia.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20
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