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  • My dream destination for voluntourism would certainly be in Ecuador in the city of San Cristobal.
  • This city is located on an island which is the easternmost island of the famous galapagos archipelagos.
  • The opportunity I am interrested in would be teaching to young children in a primary school on the island.
  • My main reason to do that is the fact that I really enjoy teaching to others and I think sharing my knowledge of languages is the most helpful way I could make a difference around these communities.
  • Another reason of my motivation to help is that families in the area of Galapagos Islands are living of tourism so speaking English well over there is essential.
  • In other words teaching English to children is a way to give them a key that open many doors in their future work researchs.
  • Voluntourism could also be an incredible occasion for me to discover a new way of seeing life because I would discover a completely different culture and a new way of living.
  • I think I would be a great candidate because when I am motivated in something I put all my heart in it.
  • Students know when a teacher really loves what he does and they are just more driven to learn more.
  • Also, I could be quite flexible in teaching other subjects as Music, Math, Science or French because to do it people need an intermediate level in Spanish and I am rather comfortable with Spanish.
  • School in Ecuador is obligatory and free until the ninth school year which corresponds to the secondary 3 in Quebec.
  • The positive things about Ecuador are the cost of life that is really low and the awesome landscapes.
  • Of course there are risks as natural disasters and high levels of crime.
  • To conclude, my adventure with Voluntourism would permit me to gain a lot of life experiments and once back in Quebec I would see the life in a different way and I would be more open minded.
  • It would also benefits children in Ecuador because they will receive free English classes and the will be more able to find work and be independent.

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    • This city is located on an island which is the easternmost island of the famous galapagos archipelagos.
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    • The opportunity I am interrested in would be teaching to young children in a primary school on the island.
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    • My main reason to do that is the fact that I really enjoy teaching to others and I think sharing my knowledge of languages is the most helpful way I could make a difference around these communities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Another reason of my motivation to help is that families in the area of Galapagos Islands are living of tourism so speaking English well over there is essential.
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    • In other words teaching English to children is a way to give them a key that open many doors in their future work researchs.
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    • Voluntourism could also be an incredible occasion for me to discover a new way of seeing life because I would discover a completely different culture and a new way of living.
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    • I think I would be a great candidate because when I am motivated in something I put all my heart in it.
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    • Also, I could be quite flexible in teaching other subjects as Music, Math, Science or French because to do it people need an intermediate level in Spanish and I am rather comfortable with Spanish.
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    • School in Ecuador is obligatory and free until the ninth school year which corresponds to the secondary 3 in Quebec.
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    • To conclude, my adventure with Voluntourism would permit me to gain a lot of life experiments and once back in Quebec I would see the life in a different way and I would be more open minded.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It would also benefits children in Ecuador because they will receive free English classes and the will be more able to find work and be independent.
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