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  • Banning meet from the cafeteria. Right and healthy for everyone

  • With increased awareness about what we really eat, where it comes from, how it is produced and modified—especially carnic aliments—, more and more people are going vegetarian every day.
  • Yet, should this be the general rule to be implemented in schools?
  • This essay will explore the idea of whether meat should be banned from our school cafeteria.
  • First and foremost, it is not true to say that carrying on a vegetarian diet is a healthy habit.
  • Actually, vegetarians have to take special pills in order to supply their nutritional faults due to the lack of meat consumption in their quotidian lives.
  • Although they state that they are as healthy as any other omnivore human being, scientific research has proved that stopping eating meat involves unhealthy alterations of our normal microbiota.
  • Another key point regarding whether offering any meet at school is how animals whose meet we consume are treated.
  • In this respect, we should make an improvement and offer meat coming from fair-trade farms that provide a healthy and respectful environment to their animals.
  • Taking all this into account, I strongly consider that meat should not be taken away from our canteen menu as Nature proves that humans have been provided with the capacity to be omnivore and thus we should profit it.
  • However, we should keep our vegetarian menu and be sure that henceforth and forevermore only eco-friendly meet is available at the cafeteria.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • With increased awareness about what we really eat, where it comes from, how it is produced and modified—especially carnic aliments—, more and more people are going vegetarian every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Actually, vegetarians have to take special pills in order to supply their nutritional faults due to the lack of meat consumption in their quotidian lives.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Although they state that they are as healthy as any other omnivore human being, scientific research has proved that stopping eating meat involves unhealthy alterations of our normal microbiota.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Another key point regarding whether offering any meet at school is how animals whose meet we consume are treated.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • In this respect, we should make an improvement and offer meat coming from fair-trade farms that provide a healthy and respectful environment to their animals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Taking all this into account, I strongly consider that meat should not be taken away from our canteen menu as Nature proves that humans have been provided with the capacity to be omnivore and thus we should profit it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • However, we should keep our vegetarian menu and be sure that henceforth and forevermore only eco-friendly meet is available at the cafeteria.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10