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Text from Alina_Pole - English

  • Why do you want to work for ABC-Company?

  • At the moment I do my internship at the Company and a position of summer intern gave me an opportunity to make an acquaintance with the ABC-Company, to understand the corporate culture and main principles of work, so I can say it intelligently the ABC-Company consistent perfect with my vision of a company to work for and to build my career.
  • The first reason I would like to work here is a corporate culture and the people in particular.
  • As a summer intern I’ve joined the Customer Services team of Operations Department and also got a chance to work at the cross-functional projects.
  • Although there were a lot of people from various Departments, the employees of the Company have such common features as willingness to help, openness and passion for their work.
  • It all makes me enjoy my daily life at the ABC-Company and I would really like to work in this environment.
  • Interesting tasks are the second reason I’d like to join the ABC-Company.
  • Since the first day of my internship I’ve got a lot of tasks to solve, which teach me to take responsibility and work in very tight deadlines, because even a work of an intern makes a contribution to Company’s functioning.
  • So I would like to keep working here at the challenging projects, improving process performance and helping my co-workers and the Company in a whole to succeed.
  • The next important thing I would like to mention is careers opportunities within the ABC-Company.
  • During my internship I’ve seen a lot of examples how the Company facilitates employees to develop their skills, to go up at their career ladder.
  • Moreover I think the reward system in the ABC-Company is fair, attractive and motivates to perform better.

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    • At the moment I do my internship at the Company and a position of summer intern gave me an opportunity to make an acquaintance with the ABC-Company, to understand the corporate culture and main principles of work, so I can say it intelligently the ABC-Company consistent perfect with my vision of a company to work for and to build my career.
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    • As a summer intern I’ve joined the Customer Services team of Operations Department and also got a chance to work at the cross-functional projects.
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    • Although there were a lot of people from various Departments, the employees of the Company have such common features as willingness to help, openness and passion for their work.
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    • Since the first day of my internship I’ve got a lot of tasks to solve, which teach me to take responsibility and work in very tight deadlines, because even a work of an intern makes a contribution to Company’s functioning.
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    • So I would like to keep working here at the challenging projects, improving process performance and helping my co-workers and the Company in a whole to succeed.
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    • During my internship I’ve seen a lot of examples how the Company facilitates employees to develop their skills, to go up at their career ladder.
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