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This is the first essay for me
Actually i dont know what should i write but i want to try. may be it will be correct.
firstly i want to thank everybody who want to help me.
my dreams to earn the IELTS certificate someday.

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- This is the first essay for me
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Sentence 1
- Actually i dont know what should i write but i want to try. may be it will be correct.
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- firstly i want to thank everybody who want to help me.
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- my dreams to earn the IELTS certificate someday.
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 3