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This is the first essay for me
Actually i dont know what should i write but i want to try. may be it will be correct.
firstly i want to thank everybody who want to help me.
my dreams to earn the IELTS certificate someday.

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标题
- This is the first essay for me
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Actually i dont know what should i write but i want to try. may be it will be correct.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- firstly i want to thank everybody who want to help me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- my dreams to earn the IELTS certificate someday.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3