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Nowadays people are getting more and more concerned about the impact of the internet on social communication.

Some people think that virtuale communication result in losing real-life social skills.

I absolutlydisagree with this statement because in my opinion , the internet is not a reason of losing social skills in real life.

First of all, person can combine real and virtual life.

The foeremost target of internet has always been the communication, and internet has excelled beyond the expectations.

Besides, with the help of such services, it has become very eacy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts, explore other cultures.

Nevertheless,there are people who consider the internet a real danger for society because teenagers spend to much time online and often avoid face-to-face communication. some of them tend to stay indoors rather than to go for a stroll with their friends.

As for me, I suppose that the internet is no more addictive than TV or plaing computer games.More than that, it actually helps us to do our work quicker and better .

However , I cosider that people should not be addicted to the internet but know there to stop.

Taking into consideration all mentond adove ,I consider that the internet promotes relationships among social groups.All the same ,people should try to maintain a balanse between their real and virtual life.