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Text from Archi62138 - English

  • english oral

  • hello , i present my english oral project , i wait your opinion , thank you !
  • let's go : hello , my name is Orlan , i'm here for present My internship in Dower informatique .
  • the company is located has sailly-labourse (62138) and i have finding my internship in to seeing a sign at my city , i have call the director for have an appointment and Mr XX XX have accept me during 6 weeks in his business.
  • I did a good experience during my internship, the director to give me a task for the day , and is going to répear another business contract , i'm alone on the business Dower informatique and i just need to complete the task for the day, i have a number phone if i have a problem .
  • The business Dower Informatique have a good profesional relation , Mr the director using contract for repear the network connections issue .
  • At the beginning, Dower informatique have 2 worker , the director, Mr XX XX and the brother of the director. yet the thirty-five hours was not respected, and for the brother of the director, the standard hourly are too long, i'm not sure but forty to fifty hours about .
  • he has leave the business Dower informatique, and the director have change the directive, he have enabled à contract opération with the profesional client , and they have close the business for the particular client .
  • somehow, i have passed a very good stage because i have learned in my speciality a new interested thing Thank you for your help guys !!
  • And if you want, i need to improve my english oral , can you add me on skype for talk with you ? i can you learn the french language :-) : orlandu62

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  • Sentence 3
    • the company is located has sailly-labourse (62138) and i have finding my internship in to seeing a sign at my city , i have call the director for have an appointment and Mr XX XX have accept me during 6 weeks in his business.
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  • Sentence 4
    • I did a good experience during my internship, the director to give me a task for the day , and is going to répear another business contract , i'm alone on the business Dower informatique and i just need to complete the task for the day, i have a number phone if i have a problem .
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • The business Dower Informatique have a good profesional relation , Mr the director using contract for repear the network connections issue .
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • At the beginning, Dower informatique have 2 worker , the director, Mr XX XX and the brother of the director. yet the thirty-five hours was not respected, and for the brother of the director, the standard hourly are too long, i'm not sure but forty to fifty hours about .
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • he has leave the business Dower informatique, and the director have change the directive, he have enabled à contract opération with the profesional client , and they have close the business for the particular client .
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • somehow, i have passed a very good stage because i have learned in my speciality a new interested thing Thank you for your help guys !!
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
    • And if you want, i need to improve my english oral , can you add me on skype for talk with you ? i can you learn the french language :-) : orlandu62
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9