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  • hello , i present my english oral project , i wait your opinion , thank you !
  • let's go : hello , my name is Orlan , i'm here for present My internship in Dower informatique .
  • the company is located has sailly-labourse (62138) and i have finding my internship in to seeing a sign at my city , i have call the director for have an appointment and Mr XX XX have accept me during 6 weeks in his business.
  • I did a good experience during my internship, the director to give me a task for the day , and is going to répear another business contract , i'm alone on the business Dower informatique and i just need to complete the task for the day, i have a number phone if i have a problem .
  • The business Dower Informatique have a good profesional relation , Mr the director using contract for repear the network connections issue .
  • At the beginning, Dower informatique have 2 worker , the director, Mr XX XX and the brother of the director. yet the thirty-five hours was not respected, and for the brother of the director, the standard hourly are too long, i'm not sure but forty to fifty hours about .
  • he has leave the business Dower informatique, and the director have change the directive, he have enabled à contract opération with the profesional client , and they have close the business for the particular client .
  • somehow, i have passed a very good stage because i have learned in my speciality a new interested thing Thank you for your help guys !!
  • And if you want, i need to improve my english oral , can you add me on skype for talk with you ? i can you learn the french language :-) : orlandu62

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    • the company is located has sailly-labourse (62138) and i have finding my internship in to seeing a sign at my city , i have call the director for have an appointment and Mr XX XX have accept me during 6 weeks in his business.
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    • I did a good experience during my internship, the director to give me a task for the day , and is going to répear another business contract , i'm alone on the business Dower informatique and i just need to complete the task for the day, i have a number phone if i have a problem .
      Votează acum!
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 4ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 4
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    • At the beginning, Dower informatique have 2 worker , the director, Mr XX XX and the brother of the director. yet the thirty-five hours was not respected, and for the brother of the director, the standard hourly are too long, i'm not sure but forty to fifty hours about .
      Votează acum!
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 6ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 6
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    • he has leave the business Dower informatique, and the director have change the directive, he have enabled à contract opération with the profesional client , and they have close the business for the particular client .
      Votează acum!
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 7ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 7
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    • And if you want, i need to improve my english oral , can you add me on skype for talk with you ? i can you learn the french language :-) : orlandu62
      Votează acum!
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 9ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 9