Correcties

Health issue is the main problem of nowadays.

Some governments notice that the number of people suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food is rising dramatically.

Some governments plan to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

I do not agree with the policy.

I do not think it could have positive effects.

When governments publish a new law or policies, they must consider as many aspects as they can.

Imposing a higher tax is not the only way to resolve this issue.

People eat more fast food because it is cheaper and more convenience.

Governments raising the tax will result in the fast food price increase.

Some poor people won’t bear it.

There are some other policies that governments could take.

For example, make a law to control the fast food process method, and where they buy, what they can use.

This is a better way to ensure people and fast food companies both win.

Some other policies such as forbidding the advertisings on TV and newspaper, or banning the child to eat them and governments can also ask company shop must keep a certain distance from schools, Tax is not the only thing governments could do.

Health is really a important issue, but when governments want to do something, they must consider the reasons behind the appearance.

Thinking more about people and make a proper law is more important.

This is the reason I do not agree governments imposing a higher tax to stop fast food.