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  • Imposing higher tax to improve fast food issues.

  • Health issue is the main problem of nowadays.
  • Some governments notice that the number of people suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food is rising dramatically.
  • Some governments plan to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
  • I do not agree with the policy.
  • I do not think it could have positive effects.
  • When governments publish a new law or policies, they must consider as many aspects as they can.
  • Imposing a higher tax is not the only way to resolve this issue.
  • People eat more fast food because it is cheaper and more convenience.
  • Governments raising the tax will result in the fast food price increase.
  • Some poor people won’t bear it.
  • There are some other policies that governments could take.
  • For example, make a law to control the fast food process method, and where they buy, what they can use.
  • This is a better way to ensure people and fast food companies both win.
  • Some other policies such as forbidding the advertisings on TV and newspaper, or banning the child to eat them and governments can also ask company shop must keep a certain distance from schools, Tax is not the only thing governments could do.
  • Health is really a important issue, but when governments want to do something, they must consider the reasons behind the appearance.
  • Thinking more about people and make a proper law is more important.
  • This is the reason I do not agree governments imposing a higher tax to stop fast food.

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