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  • A Inca's Legend: Manco Capac and Mama Ocllo

  • In the regions near to Titicaca’s lake, people lived like wild animals, since they did not have a religion, laws or an organization.
  • Theses inhabitants did not know the agriculture and they did not have textile techniques for that reasons they walked naked.
  • They had caves like houses and they fed off hunting and the food’s recollection.
  • The god INTI (sun in quechua), He felt sorry for those people and he sent his son Ayar Manco with a his sister Mama Ocllo for He civilized those barbarous populations and he founded a empire that honored to the god INTI.
  • Ayar Manco went in for teaching cohabitations rules to live in society and idolized to the god INTI to the men.
  • Instead, Mama Ocllo teached textile techniques and domestic labor to the women.
  • The inhabitants confused Ayar Manco and Mama Ocllo like gods because they wore golden clothes.
  • Ayar Manco, also called Manco Capac, had to found a city, which will be the center of the world.
  • His father, the god INTI, gave him a gold stick for he looked out for the Promised Land.
  • He recommended to travel to the north of the Titicaca’s lake and to bury the gold stick in the lands where they went past until finding a place where the gold stick bury with easiness and in that place they should found the Cuzco’s city where they will manage its Empire.
  • Manco Capac embarked on his travel soonly.
  • One day he found a majestic valley cordoned by beautiful mountains and the golden stick buried in the ground to the astonishment of Manco Capac and Mama Ocllo.
  • That is how they knew that place should be the capital of The Inca Empire and the center of the world / El ombligo del mundo.

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    • In the regions near to Titicaca’s lake, people lived like wild animals, since they did not have a religion, laws or an organization.
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    • The god INTI (sun in quechua), He felt sorry for those people and he sent his son Ayar Manco with a his sister Mama Ocllo for He civilized those barbarous populations and he founded a empire that honored to the god INTI.
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    • He recommended to travel to the north of the Titicaca’s lake and to bury the gold stick in the lands where they went past until finding a place where the gold stick bury with easiness and in that place they should found the Cuzco’s city where they will manage its Empire.
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    • One day he found a majestic valley cordoned by beautiful mountains and the golden stick buried in the ground to the astonishment of Manco Capac and Mama Ocllo.
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