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my free time
hi I am AmirMohammad,I'm from Iran,in our country people's are fun.
I and my friends eat out at weekends.we go to the jungle at Fridays..
we play volleyball after breakfast..and we walk between trees..
we are fun we have good times...
what about you?

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