添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

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  • my free time

  • hi I am AmirMohammad,I'm from Iran,in our country people's are fun.
  • I and my friends eat out at weekends.we go to the jungle at Fridays..
  • we play volleyball after breakfast..and we walk between trees..
  • we are fun we have good times...
  • what about you?

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English