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Please, correct my letter!
I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.

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- Please, correct my letter!
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- I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2