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Please, correct my letter!
I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.

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- Please, correct my letter!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- I want to go this summer in some country of West Europe.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- My friends says that be better if i visited first England or Germany but i thinks go to France (Le mans) because my former classmate study in here.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2