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Text from Leonie69000 - English

  • Gap year

  • I make my project in 7 parts : the description of my project, the Dowdewell family, my accomodation, the transport, the previsionnal budget, the preparation and my time management.
  • First, I will talk you about the description of my project.
  • I choose to go in Canada this year, in June.
  • I would like to go to Canada because I have dreaming to discover this country since my childhood.
  • Indeed I like the numerous contrasts embodied by Canada.
  • I find this country majestic !
  • And the advantage is that I am not afraid of the very cold temperatures, on the contrary I love winter landscapes as well !
  • I would like to go to Canada in order to work as an Au Pair.
  • I have never been an Au Pair but doing it in Canada is a good way to gain professional experience and to develop personal life experience (become more independent, improve my English …).
  • I am seeking new experiences in the job market.
  • I have a lot of experience in baby-sitting and with children in general !
  • I work in leisure centers since 2 summer !
  • The Gap Year as Au Pair is a way to discover one part of the country of my dreams, and it’s a way to improve my English.
  • So, in my second part of my project, i will talk you about my family in Canada.
  • I did a lot of research to find a family, especially in websites.
  • I found the profile of the Dowdeswell Family.
  • They live in the North of Vancouver and sought an Au Pair for their children.
  • They are 5 in this family (Sarah the mother, Simon the father, Emma and Nathan who are twin, Tom, the baby) In the third part of my project, I talk about the accomodation.
  • They send me some pictures of the house.
  • This is very typical of Canada and very charming too.
  • My fourth part is about transport.
  • At first my parents accompany me by car to the Charles de Gaulle airport.
  • Then the plane will take me to Vancouver airport.
  • Got there I would take a train and my host family will meet me at the station!
  • My fifth part is about previsionnal budget, I make a table with my spendings during my Gap Year and my revenue before leaving.
  • With my savings and wages I have enough for my Gap Year.
  • There can be I would try to find me a job part time if I have time.
  • My sixth part is about the preparation.
  • My seventh part is about my time management, during the whole year I will especially keep children, do household chores of the house and be a full member of the family.
  • If I have time I would take some English classes to improve my language skills.
  • It will be easier to communicate with my host family.
  • if my host family agrees I would go see my cousin who lives in the United States in New York.
  • We could then visit this city together : central park, the Empire state bulding, time square, statue of liberty and all those other things that make the reputation and charm of this city.

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