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Beginner
Hi !
I'm new in this web site and i want learn English because today it's very important to know many langage.
My english is not very good anymore but i want really improve it.
I'm french and i live in Paris.
I would like meet some people to talk.
Sorry for mistake. Thanks. Julien

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- I'm new in this web site and i want learn English because today it's very important to know many langage.
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- My english is not very good anymore but i want really improve it.
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- I'm french and i live in Paris.
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- I would like meet some people to talk.
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- Sorry for mistake. Thanks. Julien
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