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Beginner
Hi !
I'm new in this web site and i want learn English because today it's very important to know many langage.
My english is not very good anymore but i want really improve it.
I'm french and i live in Paris.
I would like meet some people to talk.
Sorry for mistake. Thanks. Julien

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- Beginner
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句子 1
- Hi !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm new in this web site and i want learn English because today it's very important to know many langage.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- My english is not very good anymore but i want really improve it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I'm french and i live in Paris.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I would like meet some people to talk.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Sorry for mistake. Thanks. Julien
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6