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I think sometimes money isn't everything.
If I have a family.
I will be happy but if haven't I will be sorry because most important thing are them! not money.
But if I haven't any money I can feel little bit sad because I can't buy clothes, house, car etc. without money.
So we can say money is little bit important for people.
I want to have both of them.A good family and money.
İf I have them I will be happy.
If I want to have a good family or friends I have to be a good person and If I want to have money I can work very hard.

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- I think sometimes money isn't everything.
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문장 2
- If I have a family.
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문장 3
- I will be happy but if haven't I will be sorry because most important thing are them! not money.
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- But if I haven't any money I can feel little bit sad because I can't buy clothes, house, car etc. without money.
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- So we can say money is little bit important for people.
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- I want to have both of them.A good family and money.
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- İf I have them I will be happy.
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- If I want to have a good family or friends I have to be a good person and If I want to have money I can work very hard.
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