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  • I think sometimes money isn't everything.
  • If I have a family.
  • I will be happy but if haven't I will be sorry because most important thing are them! not money.
  • But if I haven't any money I can feel little bit sad because I can't buy clothes, house, car etc. without money.
  • So we can say money is little bit important for people.
  • I want to have both of them.A good family and money.
  • İf I have them I will be happy.
  • If I want to have a good family or friends I have to be a good person and If I want to have money I can work very hard.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English