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After school I went to university at the Faculty of Architecture of Design and studied only the first course. then I went to another country to work due to lack of money and to help my family. then I dropped out of university, but I was abroad working as a bartender at the restaurant. but one day I realized that education is necessary to get to realize my dream, the dream of childhood to become an desighner or a travel agent.

I can draw and to invent different designs, patterns, I think I have a talent because I drew everything that I saw when I was little, and even made my own personal logo).

I chose your university to carry out my dream and do not lose my talent).

Why I decided to study in your university?

Because your university is one of the goodest university in the world, because Korea is one of world's developing countries.

By the way I have learning Korean for one month and I think Korean is easy to learn, I like it.)