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my family
There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I.
My father is a worker, he is very busy, he goes to work early and comes home from work late.
My mother is a officer, she is very busy,too.
My father and my mother are lovely person, I love them so much.

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- There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I.
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- My father is a worker, he is very busy, he goes to work early and comes home from work late.
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- My mother is a officer, she is very busy,too.
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- My father and my mother are lovely person, I love them so much.
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