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my family
There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I.
My father is a worker, he is very busy, he goes to work early and comes home from work late.
My mother is a officer, she is very busy,too.
My father and my mother are lovely person, I love them so much.

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- my family
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문장 1
- There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- My father is a worker, he is very busy, he goes to work early and comes home from work late.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- My mother is a officer, she is very busy,too.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- My father and my mother are lovely person, I love them so much.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4