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After finishing school I went to the University at the Faculty of Architecture and Design and studied only the first course.

Then I went to another country to work due to lack of money and to help my family.

Then I dropped out of University, but I was still abroad, working as a bartender at a restaurant.

But one day I realized that education is necessary to achieve my childhood dream: the dream to become a designer or a travel agent.

I think I can drow and also invent different designs and patterns.

Because I drew almost everything that I saw and created unusual ornaments when I was little, and even made my own personal logo).At school I drew pictures for the holidays, where there was a contest for the best work, and I often won .

I want to be the best designer.I chose your University to achieve my dream and to not lose my talent).Because I have heard that the Gachon University is one among the best Universities in the world.

And also because Korea is one of the world's fastest developing countries.

I like Korean culture and I saw some Korean historical films.

By the way I have been learning Korean for the last one month and I think Korean is easy to learn, I like it.) 감사합니다